Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Exercise : Simile

- Sports to an object
1. Soccer is like a hunter.
2. Baseball is like a train.
3. Waterpolo is like a dolphin.


- Holiday to an object
1. Thanksgiving is like a buffet.
2. Halloween is like a dressing room.
3. New Years is like a reset button.




-Person to an object
1. My dads is like a rooster
2. My mom is like a hen
3. My brother is like a cock

Thursday, February 2, 2012

Metaphors

Universe to an object

1.The sun is  a dandelion.
2.The moon is  a school of silver fish,
3. The stars are a lamp.

Emotions to an object

1. Emptiness is a bottle.
2. Lonely is a abandon House.
3. sacrifices is a brave warrior.

Person to an object

1. My dad is a rooster.
2. My mom is a hen.
3. My brother is a cock.

Thursday, January 19, 2012

hyperbole - tall tale poem

My love is a box
That is deep as the ocean.
My heart is a crater
Waiting to be filled.
My stomach,
Impatiently waiting for your response,
Is a group of drunken butterflies
Struggling to take flight.
What will you tell me?
Are you  my love?

hyperbole - story

my friend is so cheap he dont even shower,he say he is saving water .When i ask him to let me borrow money he be paying me in pennies .He wears the same shirt everyday for the past 6 months . When he asks a girl out in a date he be taking them to jack in the box and makes them order off the dollar menu plus he makes the girl pay for the order ,He orders a water cup to not pay for a soda and shares the water cup .the end of the date he takes the water cup home and uses it every day .

Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Uncovering Allusion - Hip-Hop

(Line 1 & 2) A female from georgia just grep up out herself, she left the plantation without having the skills to read.


(Line 5) She valued having to be patient , keeping her spirits up and to keep wishing.


(Line 15) More of like a trait nurturing, with emotions and feelings.

Uncovering Allusion - classic , Aint i a woman?

The man that the author refers to is a white man. (Line1)

Like she refers to she couldnt take any shortcut towards the mud puddle, she had to walk through it. (Line6)


She s describing how she was doing a hard job. (Line10)


There was no male to help her out in the work progress. (Line12)


The little man in black is the priest. (Line 24)


Making a statement about christ, more of how he came from, trying to confirm a point. (Line 28 & 29)


Its reffering to it takes one person to turn the world upside down. (Line 30, 31 & 32)


Theres a time that everyone goes to there rough spots , but be strong cause in a little bit things are going to get better. (Line 33 & 34)

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Alliteration

1. Terrific Tony takes his Frosted Flakes to trade Timmy the toad.

2. Elephants have English Earmuffs on their ears.

3. Black Bears so vicious, strong brown hugs, leaves you with a mark.

Tounge twister

Rice with some Ice Coffe , will never leave a  Grief. shouldnt being Thiefing, my phone is always Ringing, many thoughts get me Thinking, ill never let it Sink me, im Feeling it , Adrenaline.
the Fights we Fought, the Thoughts that been Taught, damages that we caught, lets get it heal so when we reunite again we can actually feel. words shock me like a electric eel.