Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Similes Poem

Chrismas is like a store
Filled with many surprises.
Chrismas is like a re carnation of thanksgiving
It brings family together.
Chrismas is as important as life
There's new traits that we always encounter.

Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Exercise : Simile

- Sports to an object
1. Soccer is like a hunter.
2. Baseball is like a train.
3. Waterpolo is like a dolphin.


- Holiday to an object
1. Thanksgiving is like a buffet.
2. Halloween is like a dressing room.
3. New Years is like a reset button.




-Person to an object
1. My dads is like a rooster
2. My mom is like a hen
3. My brother is like a cock

Thursday, February 2, 2012

Metaphors

Universe to an object

1.The sun is  a dandelion.
2.The moon is  a school of silver fish,
3. The stars are a lamp.

Emotions to an object

1. Emptiness is a bottle.
2. Lonely is a abandon House.
3. sacrifices is a brave warrior.

Person to an object

1. My dad is a rooster.
2. My mom is a hen.
3. My brother is a cock.

Thursday, January 19, 2012

hyperbole - tall tale poem

My love is a box
That is deep as the ocean.
My heart is a crater
Waiting to be filled.
My stomach,
Impatiently waiting for your response,
Is a group of drunken butterflies
Struggling to take flight.
What will you tell me?
Are you  my love?

hyperbole - story

my friend is so cheap he dont even shower,he say he is saving water .When i ask him to let me borrow money he be paying me in pennies .He wears the same shirt everyday for the past 6 months . When he asks a girl out in a date he be taking them to jack in the box and makes them order off the dollar menu plus he makes the girl pay for the order ,He orders a water cup to not pay for a soda and shares the water cup .the end of the date he takes the water cup home and uses it every day .

Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Uncovering Allusion - Hip-Hop

(Line 1 & 2) A female from georgia just grep up out herself, she left the plantation without having the skills to read.


(Line 5) She valued having to be patient , keeping her spirits up and to keep wishing.


(Line 15) More of like a trait nurturing, with emotions and feelings.

Uncovering Allusion - classic , Aint i a woman?

The man that the author refers to is a white man. (Line1)

Like she refers to she couldnt take any shortcut towards the mud puddle, she had to walk through it. (Line6)


She s describing how she was doing a hard job. (Line10)


There was no male to help her out in the work progress. (Line12)


The little man in black is the priest. (Line 24)


Making a statement about christ, more of how he came from, trying to confirm a point. (Line 28 & 29)


Its reffering to it takes one person to turn the world upside down. (Line 30, 31 & 32)


Theres a time that everyone goes to there rough spots , but be strong cause in a little bit things are going to get better. (Line 33 & 34)